Animatic of my (wannabe) graduation flim

Ashvey · Post by **Ashvey** » 11 Feb 2008, 22:27

Hi, this is my animatic, exclusivly made with TVPaint! It's not really perfect, but I'm a little proud of it!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=HmcurA3yCuo

This is the story of a kingdom, a tales of two twins, separate at birth...
(Because of the rituals, belief, superstition and also because the king is a horrible arshol..erf I mean an horrible tyran!)
16 years later, a war explode.

oliveuk · Post by **oliveuk** » 12 Feb 2008, 00:29

some really good ideas Ashvey. nice cinematography, nice music and vfx. some really good animations even if it s only an animatic but something that bothers me is the cut from the 2 armies (civilian war??) facing each other to a sequence with only 2 warriors inside the church. I am not sure how we got there.

The ending is a bit on the quick side. You have pretty much 1 minute of expostion for 1 minute for your second and third act. Try to balance this a bit better.

Nice work, keep going, this sounds really promising.

Olive

SeanAni · Post by **SeanAni** » 12 Feb 2008, 01:24

Good story and really beautiful camera views~
I also agree with oliveuk that the rhythm is only a little quick
Hope to see more of you zmaing works:)
Good job~

musrami · Post by **musrami** » 12 Feb 2008, 08:58

Yes, nice story board. I like your style

Ashvey · Post by **Ashvey** » 08 Mar 2008, 18:38

Thank you guys, the problem was to put all my story in a short movie which must had a duration of 1min-1min30, and because it's already over than 2min, My project wasn't chosen by the jury... :/

So, I'm working on another group project, AND I'm working to on "SOEURS"

Here are some of my works on the group project:
Character Design:

Also, I didn't do the following animatic, but it's for you to see in which project I'm on!

BTW, all the animations in this project will be made with TVP!

And in the same time, I'm working on my own project, and here's a BG I made with TVP:

And the Idontknowwhyitssodark animation test:

rony · Post by **rony** » 08 Mar 2008, 20:48

Hi everybody, and Hi Mister, it's been a while ! I' m back to post some of my last works too.

Great job!! And as I already told you, if you need some help one day to realis
" soeurs " just ask !

Ashvey · Post by **Ashvey** » 11 Mar 2008, 21:06

Hmmm yeah, I didn't forget, but you know, I think I'll do it alone for the moment I'm at LTAM, 'cause if I finish it, or do a great part of this short all by myself, it will kick the arses of aaaall the teachers, which said "omg, it is too difficult for students!"
tsk tsk tsk... v_v